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12 July 2009 @ 03:28 pm
To be turned around, Act I, Chapter I  
Title: To be turned around
Authors: [info]armillarysphere and [info]evolia
Rating: NC-17 overall, although this is PG-13
Pairing: PoynterJones
Genre: AU - Romance/Drama
Part: 1/17
Summary: Act I - the beginnings. In this story, Dougie is born and bred in South Africa, and is a professional surfer. McFly, this up and coming band from Britain, decide to take an extended holiday to Dougie's hometown after their bassist bail on them.
A/N: Hello, and welcome in 'To be turned around'! This fic, our first collaboration Pones, was written ages ago - although it did take us a long time, it's not a small story. This story is cut into three acts, and we hope you'll enjoy this introduction chapter enough that you will want to read more and get into the story! Concrit is most welcome. Also, we promise we will not take months to answer your comments. We feel really bad about this, and it won't happen again!
Warnings: Drug use.
Disclaimer: This is fiction, which means it's not true. We just have healthy imaginations.

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Being a surfer is a state of mind. Surfing is more than just a sport, a game. For most people, it’s just that, and it’s fine, but when you cross that line, that fine line between the sport and the passion, it all becomes more. It’s more intense and more demanding, more rewarding and more satisfying.

Dougie crossed that line at age 5. He had been on this board, that his father bought him when he was three, for them to go surfing together, and he’d been paddling in the water, his mother knee deep in the ocean behind him, making sure he was safe.

And there had been this wave. It wasn’t a big one, but it seemed gigantic for Dougie. And he took it. And he laughed as it wiped him out. And that was it.

His mum joked that he was addicted to the ocean, and maybe he was. He never felt better than when he was out on his board, just him and the waves, the roar of the water over his head, the rumble under his feet as he rode towards the shore, the call of the seabirds above him. It was such an effort to get him to go to school that in the end his mum just gave up, tutored him herself for a few years until he scraped through a couple of exams and after that he was free.

He was barely in his teens by the time he started entering competitions, beating guys way older than him easily, and while the money he won wasn't much (yet), it went some way to supporting his mum after his dad left them, him and his mum and his sister, and moved to England, without so much as a note on the kitchen table. Dougie never really forgave him.

His love for the ocean just seemed to grow after that, an insatiable hunger to feel free, to be alone, to be in control of something in his life. On his board, riding a wave, he was the master of the oceans. In a tube, fingers grazing the walls of water on either side of him, he was himself, free to scream his rage at his father, his sorrow.

He was kind of a loner, hanging around the kids of his age because his pro gig was quite cool, and got him invited to all the parties. He didn’t talk to most of them, though, didn’t get drunk with them. He did score girls, though, small brunettes or tall blondes, he didn’t really care. Then there was the guys. He was pickier, but in the end, it didn’t matter more than with girls.

He kept winning though, travelling to California and Australia for bigger and bigger competitions, sponsorship deals landing nicely in his lap, although he turned down the modelling offers unlike some of his rivals. He doesn't mind wearing the gear, makes a change from scraping money from odd jobs to pay for new boards and suits, but posing for photos in it just isn't him.

He started teaching a few lessons, just for the hell of it, when he'd been pro for a few years already, spending the time when he isn't practicing with little kids and their parents on the beach, loving the smiles he gets when they catch their first wave, the proud cries and whoops when they get back to shore, high-fives and sand flying around all over.

And it’s how he ends up offering his services to two young guys, one night as he's enjoying a drink at the hotel bar, the hotel next to which he lives, and that roofs his surf club. He hears them talking about surfing as they go past him, thick English accents that make his skin bristle a little, just out of habit and residual anger that will always be there.

“Mate, we’re in South Africa. We gotta learn how to surf!”

“The surf school is booked all week, Dan. Can’t you wait?”

“No, I bloody well can't. I was supposed to be learning in Australia, remember? Then that – that prick ruined everything.”

“Don't take it out on me, all right?”

Dougie can't help but turn his head to look at them, a couple of average looking guys, one with a shaved head and, okay, maybe not so average eyes, and the other with a ridiculous mop of curly hair, and freckles, and laughter lines around his eyes that suggest when he smiles, it's probably a major event.

Dougie's pulled worse looking blokes.

“Sorry. Can’t – you know.”

“Yeah. Whatever. We’ve got time here, Danny, we took a one way ticket. We can wait a week.”

Dougie takes a swig of his beer, wiping at the corner of his mouth with the back of his thumb before throwing them a glance. The bar’s almost empty bar the three of them, and well, they’re not really being quiet.

“Or I could teach you.”

The one apparently called Danny, with the hair, spins around on his stool fast enough that he half falls off, only to be caught by Mr Blue Eyes who grabs onto the back of his shirt and hauls him upright again. Dougie grins.

“Yeah? I dunno if we can afford private lessons.”

“Oh, no, I don't charge.”

Mr Blue Eyes raises a suspicious eyebrow at him, and, yeah, well, Dougie probably would too. It seems unbelievable that a guy like him wouldn’t be looking for easy money made on tourists. But Dougie’s got more than enough, and this is just fun for him.

“You don’t? Then what do you want from us?”

It sounds low, a bit threatening, a little scared, wary. It’s Dougie’s time to raise an eyebrow.

“What could I possibly want from two strangers? I just like giving lessons, that’s all.”

“Come on, Harry, don’t be like that. We should make the most of it.”

Blue Eyes – Harry – snorts and takes another drink of his beer, still watching Dougie closely as he slips down off his stool and walks over to them, his flip-flops making almost no sound on the tiled floor. He holds his hand out and gives them another smile.

“I'm Dougie. I live next door. If you want lessons, come and find me tomorrow. If you don't, then no hard feelings, and maybe I'll see you around.”

The curly haired dude, Danny, shakes his hand, and gives a pointed look to his friend, who reluctantly does, too, after a few seconds. Then Dougie shrugs, smiles at them, and turns around. His bed is calling him forth.

**

When Dougie goes out on his porch the next morning, mug of steaming coffee in hand and his iPod blasting in his ears, he looks out at the beach, the slow, soft breeze promising some nice waves later on. There's his board there, next to the small coffee table he has outside, and he runs a hand over it, testing the roughness, wondering if he needs to wax it today.

His mind wanders back to the night before and those two guys, and maybe they'll come, maybe they won't, but it certainly won't stop Dougie from running out to the waves when his coffee is consumed. It's been two days since he last got to surf, the day before filled up with meetings with sponsors, and he can feel the itch in his legs, the burn in his arms.

It's early enough that the ocean is still the colour of steel, the sand looking more like rocks than the almost white grains that will fly up around his ankles in a little while.  He watches the surn burn through the clouds, taking away the mist as he drains his coffee, leaning his elbows on the rail that runs around the porch.

He can see a couple of guys jogging on the beach, the wind taking their voices away from him, and it's almost as though they're in a music video as he watchess their lips move in time to the songs playing in his ears.

He smiles to himself when he sees that it's the two English guys from the night before, and he has to admit that he'd never have picked them as the type to go out training that early in the morning when he sees the gloves thrown over their shoulders.

The curly-haired one - Danny, that was it - raises his hand in greeting when he looks up, his eyes meeting Dougie's, before he nudges the other one with his elbow, pointing in Dougie's direction.

Dougie pulls out one of his headphones and cups a hand around his mouth as they walk closer up the dunes.

"Morning!"

He can see sweat on their skin when they're close enough, making them shine somewhat under the moody sky, and he leaves his mug of coffee on the coffee table before going down the three steps, feet hitting the sand, toes wriggling into it.

"Morning."

"So, you're really up to teaching us without any kind of charging?"

The blue eyed one, Harry, really doesn't seem to want to let go, seriously. He's hung up on something, seemingly certain that Dougie will try and drain something out of them. He's got other things to think about, to be honest.

"Sure. I've got boards in the back, here, but my wetsuits won't fit you. Can do with your swimming shorts, though. You just might lose them if the waves get wilder."

He smiles, and Danny grins as well, even Harry chuckles when Danny elbows him in the ribs.

"Yeah, yeah, that's fine."

"Okay, come on then, let's grab boards for you."

Dougie leads them around the house, grabbing his coffee as they go. He opens up the garage door and steps back to let Danny and Harry go inside.

"Fuck me, that's a lot of boards."

Dougie grins, pushing past them to run his hand over a few of his favourites.

"Pick any one you like. My baby's up on the deck, so these are all free."

They both step in more firmly; Dougie watching them with an amused eye, seeing that the set of Harry’s shoulders is slightly more relaxed than it was the day before. Oh, he’ll get over it if they have a few lessons together, Dougie’s sure of it. He can understand mistrust, but he’s the kind of guy with whom it never lasts really that long. He doesn’t really know why.

He finishes his coffee and goes back inside to leave the mug by the sink, grabbing his wetsuit on the way. He needs to wash it, it still smells of salt water, and he’s afraid if he doesn’t rinse it soon enough, it’s going to start to crack at the shoulders, and George, his half best friend, half manager, will skin him alive for ruining yet another suit.

Not his fault he never thinks of doing that.

He pulls it on, rolling it at his hips as he goes back to the garage, seeing both Harry and Danny aren’t there anymore, and two boards are off as well. He smiles and goes back to the front of the house, seeing them here, observing the boards with slightly worried eyes.

“Don’t worry, you’ll be fine.”

He grabs his own board, mentally promising her a good wax when they’re done, and motions towards the beach.

“Let’s go, gentlemen!”

“So, have either of you ever surfed before? And watching Point Break doesn't count.”

“We're virgins.”

Harry snorts and Dougie grins at Danny's words, pointing for them to put the boards down.

“Well we'll soon sort that out.”

He gets them through the necessary first lessons, about the strap and the need to be careful with your board when you wipe out, and then gets them to paddling on the beach, teaching them the first basic moves. Getting up on your board, teaching them each with a different leg, as he soon learns that Danny’s a leftie.

“Okay, well, today, we’re only going to go and paddle a bit, maybe try and get yourselves up on your boards. Just get a taste of how it feels in the water.”

Dougie puts on his wetsuit completely then, watching them get strapped to their boards, and then they’re off, Dougie going slowly to keep close to them, checking the incoming waves. He sits on his board and points out at the ocean.

“The whole game is to find the right wave, the one you’ll pick at the right time and will take you far enough. It’s mostly feeling, to be honest, but the thing is, you don’t have to try at every wave. Just go for it whenever you feel like it’s the right one.”

“Right, yeah, okay. I - argh!”

Danny capsizes halfway through his sentence, rolling sideways off his board, and Dougie can’t help but snigger, while Harry laughs loudly.

“Classic.”

“Fuck off, Judd.”

Danny flicks water off his hair, and Dougie licks his lips. He lets them bicker as he goes for a wave himself, paddling a little before positioning himself a second before it hits, and then he’s off, feeling as if he’s flying off the water, crouching low on his board, patting her for a second. It’s not a big wave and it’s soon finished, but, damn, it felt good.

The boys seem impressed but don’t say anything, and they go on with the lesson, Dougie teaching them as much as he can how to feel a wave. They won’t get it right away, and it’s going to take even longer for them to surf in any way gracefully, but they’re good enough. Dougie feels like they’re instinctive with some things in their lives.

After a few hours, the three of them are on the beach, and both Danny and Harry look absolutely knackered. It makes Dougie smile.

“So, um. Is this what you do?”

“What, teach surf lessons? Nah, this is just for fun. I went Pro a few years ago already, got a break between competitions so I'm home for a while.”

“I told you he was a pro.”

“Oh, stop sucking up.”

Dougie laughs, wriggling his toes in the sand, warm and comforting under his feet, the sun beating down on them, sparkling off the water in showers of diamonds as the waves crash onto the shore.

“What do you two do then? I take it you work together? Or you're just together?”

Danny bursts out laughing, and it’s loud and obvious and it makes Dougie grin despite himself. He thought right, because well, when Danny laughs, his whole body does. Harry punches him in the shoulder good-naturedly, shaking his head with a smile.

“Nah, not together. Too many complications. We work together. We’re kind of. In a band.”

So that would be why they got some sort of instinct to them. Dougie tilts his head, nodding. He could have seen them together, though. The fact that there wasn’t any offended sputtering at his question makes him slightly happy. He hates dealing with homophobic people. He’s had enough of his fair share of guys to feel offended himself.

“Any big?”

“Kinda. We were getting there.”

“What happened?”

Dougie unzips his wetsuit, pushing it down to his waist, rolling his shoulders as the sun hits them, and he sees both Danny and Harry checking out the tattoo on his right arm before he stretches back on the sand, propped up on his elbows as he talks.

“Our bassist walked out on us about a month ago.”

“Twat.”

“Danny's still bitter.”

Dougie gives Danny a soft smile, watching the clouds passing over the guy’s eyes.

“As I see.”

Harry nudges Danny’s shoulder, making him sit up straighter. He plays with the grains of sand at his feet, letting it run between his fingers, and Dougie notices how big they are. Like, really big. God.

“So you’re on holidays?”

“Yeah. Taking a break. Tom, the third member of our band came along with his bird. So we’re kinda stuck together. Danny’s kinda dumb, but I deal with it.”

Dougie snorts a laugh as Danny punches Harry on the arm, glowering at him.

“I'm not dumb, we just think at different speeds.”

“You can say that again.”

Danny makes a face, and Dougie has the almost irrepressible urge to pet his hair and give him a beer. He doesn’t, though, (almost irrepressible) just smiles at Danny when he rolls his eyes at Harry, mouthing a ‘whatever’.

“And it’s not that we’re not feeling good here, but we did promise to meet up with Tom for lunch, didn’t we?”

“Um, yeah.”

Danny turns to Dougie, looking at him with something that looks half like a pout and half like a smirk. Dougie’s a little confused.

“So, well, it was fun.”

“Door's always open if you want another lesson some time.”

“Yeah?”

“Yeah, you're not completely hopeless.”

Harry snorts, brushing off his legs as he stands up, tugging on Danny's arm to get him up too.

“Well, we might see you around then.”

Dougie nods but doesn’t move, watching them leaving the boards against the white wood railing of his porch, and he figures that anyway, they need some fixing up as well, those two. He goes back himself in the water, gives himself a good, hard session, and when he gets out of the water, it’s way past lunch time.
 
 
( 51 comments — Leave a comment )
dusantiago[info]dusantiago on July 12th, 2009 02:52 pm (UTC)
Ah, it's been so long, but it was certainly worth while.

Again, ladies, thank you.
THE TURBO SLUT[info]evolia on July 12th, 2009 02:57 pm (UTC)
Well, wasn't that fast! But thank you *bows*. Only beginning!
Nathan: Flones Kiss <3[info]nathd5 on July 12th, 2009 03:02 pm (UTC)
Yay! New stuff from you two. Excited to see where it goes. And Yay for making me read outside of my regular pairings. Its funny, I usually hate Pones and I hate AU. But I am loving this thus far. Uncanny. Can't wait to see where it goes from here, its going to be a very exciting ride. :D Thanks for writing!
V: Danny/Dougie - tongue[info]armillarysphere on July 12th, 2009 03:09 pm (UTC)
*bows* thank you!

I'm not the biggest Pones fan either, but I did end up loving this particular versions of them a lot, so I hope you will too! :)
(no subject) - [info]evolia on July 12th, 2009 03:10 pm (UTC) (Expand)
(no subject) - [info]nathd5 on July 12th, 2009 03:13 pm (UTC) (Expand)
ordinarypsycho[info]ordinarypsycho on July 12th, 2009 03:37 pm (UTC)
wow, this is fantastic. seriously, i cannot wait for the next part. :D
THE TURBO SLUT[info]evolia on July 12th, 2009 03:39 pm (UTC)
Aw, thank you! We try our best *blushes*. New readers always make me gleeful, hehe.
kay_borriefairy[info]kay_borriefairy on July 12th, 2009 03:45 pm (UTC)
oooh! How exciting a new story from you ladies!

Great first chapter, can't wait to read more!
V: Danny/Dougie - mcminis[info]armillarysphere on July 12th, 2009 03:47 pm (UTC)
Hee, yes, been a while...

Thank you! More will come soon :D
autumnconfusion[info]autumnconfusion on July 12th, 2009 03:49 pm (UTC)
I have to admit that I told everyone to leave me alone as soon as I read on twitter Ellie had posted a new story! It took me ages to find the time (and really convince everyone that, yes, they HAVE to leave me alone) to read it but here I am!

It's been months, maybe even a year already, since I last read Poynter/Jones but that's alright. I don't mind reading a different pairing, a pairing I don't really like anymore, when I know it's written by two amazing girls! I completely trust you to give us a nice, surprising but oh so well-written story! Besides, I think I wasn't much of a fan of Judd/Jones last year until I stumbled across your Junes...so maybe I'll find a new love for Pones, hehe.

Anyhow, about the story!

I adore it already. For real. The descriptions of what Dougie feels when he's surfing, made my fingers tingle. If I had a beach right now and the weather was amazing, I'm sure I'd have stopped reading and just grabbed a board and see if I'd experience the same thing. Now that says a lot, haha.

I'm already excited to see how this will develop and 17 parts! Oh I can't wait! Have to make sure I tell my friend she has to check lj again, that you girls are back with more! WOOO.

xxx
V: Danny/Dougie - transylvania[info]armillarysphere on July 12th, 2009 04:52 pm (UTC)
Oh, Fien. You really do know how to make us flail like idiots XD ♥

Ahaha, well, I really don't like Pones, and Ellie had to do a lot of convincing to get me to write this, but I'm glad I did, because I love this little world we created, so yeah. Hopefully you'll find a new love for this Pones, if not the pairing as a whole ;)

Really happy that you like it so far! The descriptions were really fun to write - being inside Dougie's head instead of Danny's or Harry's means we had a bit more licence to write like that.

More soon! :) <3
dijian_kwaii: Dougie![info]dijian_kwaii on July 12th, 2009 04:04 pm (UTC)
I love you two.
For writing this pairing,
hell, for writing,
for slipping in a Point Break mention...
The list goes on :)
Can't wait for the next bit.
THE TURBO SLUT: Dougie / How so gorgeous?[info]evolia on July 12th, 2009 04:09 pm (UTC)
I've always wanted to write Dougie as a pro surfer, and the only one that seems to fit with him in this idea is Danny, so...yep yep! And Point Break = amazingly funny and cult movie!
(no subject) - [info]armillarysphere on July 12th, 2009 07:30 pm (UTC) (Expand)
x_sweet_repose[info]x_sweet_repose on July 12th, 2009 04:10 pm (UTC)
I adored this. although, the last line, I did think hard session meant something other than another surfing session. I'm always there with the double meanings and inuendos.

awesome start to what I envisage will be another epic series from you two!

Sam x
V: Danny - oh fuck. collar bones[info]armillarysphere on July 12th, 2009 04:53 pm (UTC)
Ahaha, I think I probably thought the same when Ellie wrote that line ;)

Thank you! Hope you'll like the rest of it :D
miarae[info]miarae on July 12th, 2009 04:43 pm (UTC)
Ooooh I like this! I can't wait for the next chapter, any clue as to when it'll be up?
THE TURBO SLUT[info]evolia on July 12th, 2009 04:50 pm (UTC)
Thanks! And lol, barely started already being pressed for more, me likes!
But no idea - probably during the week, though.
(no subject) - [info]miarae on July 12th, 2009 04:56 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Rebecca.: pones danny licks dougie[info]stolenglancesx on July 12th, 2009 04:52 pm (UTC)
Oh Yes!
You two writing another massive fic together? I'm happy now :)

I love this. And I love everything else you guys write, and it's good to see a Pones from you. I love it already, and look forward to reading more of it!!

Hope to see more soon!!

V: Danny/Dougie - tongue[info]armillarysphere on July 12th, 2009 04:54 pm (UTC)
Actually, we already wrote this one aaaages ago, and we've written a bunch of others too. We just got busy with RL and didn't have time to sort anything out to get it posted!

Aw, thank you so much. More soon!
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THE TURBO SLUT[info]evolia on July 12th, 2009 08:26 pm (UTC)
(and possibly a tiny little bit of wee. If you wanted to know)

We didn't ;).
Overall, though, just - thank you! We're so glad that people keep on reading us, despite the pairing or the premise of the fic. It's very flattering and it makes us want to give our best every time!

So, thank you =).
Temp/TJ: surfing the sun[info]lambofcurl101th on July 12th, 2009 09:00 pm (UTC)
Oooh, I was so excited to see something new from you guys!! And was sort of shocked about it being Pones, but I'm excited and there are some little hints of Junes that are making me quite happy. (The OTP will never die. ♥ ) It's cool that you two write more than just a single pairing. You get into centering on more than just two characters all of the time and write whole different relationships that are as much like each other as the boys are. That takes loads of talent and I admire you both for it. <3

and laughter lines around his eyes that suggest when he smiles, it's probably a major event.

Danny's smile is pure amazing. I love this way of describing it, it's so true.

Curious to meet Tom and Gi in this, and very, v excited for Danny and Harry's next lesson with Dougs. I'm usually sort of apprehensive when Dougie is written as a major character, cos there are lots of ways to make him seem super innocent or super detatched, but I have no worries with him in your hands after reading STL, and then IBD.

Oooosshh, I can't wait for the next bit!! Hope I'm not away when you post it, but if I am, I'll just have the best returning home present waiting for me!! =D
V: Boypile[info]armillarysphere on July 12th, 2009 09:59 pm (UTC)
Ah, I'm afraid there really isn't much Junes in this particular fic. ;) We did feel a little like we had to prove that we could write more than just one pairing, and this was actually written long before IBD (I think, anyway! My memory gets fuzzy - we're writing all the time, even if we don't post...). But thank you, so much. :)

I can't remember which one of us wrote that line about Danny's smile, oh dear, lol.

*squishes you*
celestiall6[info]celestiall6 on July 12th, 2009 09:45 pm (UTC)
SOO excited for your new story! I love your fics to death. Plus I've always wanted to see Surfer!Dougie and my wildest dreams are coming true! You both write brilliantly and I can't wait for the next bit and :insert fangirl squeal: and all that jazz.
THE TURBO SLUT: Dougie / lick here.[info]evolia on July 12th, 2009 10:05 pm (UTC)
I've always wanted to see surfer!Dougie too! So glad I'm not the only one, hee. I hope we make you happy with this =). It's more of a philosophy than anything else in this fic though, but whatever.
your favorite black Irish.: favorites[info]m0nkeysbrains on July 12th, 2009 10:50 pm (UTC)
ohhh. this is... the characterization is just perfect. my three favorites...! can't really form words right now, sorry. it's that good.
V: Harry/Dougie/Danny - topless[info]armillarysphere on July 12th, 2009 11:10 pm (UTC)
Heee, thanks very much! :D More soon. x
Ryuko Ishida[info]ryukoishida on July 12th, 2009 10:56 pm (UTC)
Ah... Pones with a summer feel. I'm liking it already even though I'm not the biggest Pones shipper ^^

"I'm not dumb. We just think at different speeds." Love that comeback from Danny. Haha...

Can't wait to read more!
THE TURBO SLUT[info]evolia on July 12th, 2009 11:09 pm (UTC)
Pones without a summer feel sounds a bit weird realy ;). They're not our favourite pairing either, but I have such a soft spot for them, and I convinced Von because I really wanted to rite this. It turned into being much bigger than I expected, but - it made us really love those two we've been writing, so hopefully you'll love them too!
joshyouare[info]joshyouare on July 13th, 2009 01:34 am (UTC)
UGH!
von
i love this O_o
and was i the onlyone loling at the idea of dougie with an ozzy accent?
as far as pones gose
OM NOM
but i still need Judd in my life
>.>
hes miiiinnnne
*cast eyes around the room*
you hear?
MIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNEEEEEEEE!
*grabs harry and runs*
V[info]armillarysphere on July 13th, 2009 12:43 pm (UTC)
Re: UGH!
woo, glad you liked it!

lol, silly, he's South African, not Aussie ;)
(no subject) - [info]joshyouare on July 13th, 2009 05:10 pm (UTC) (Expand)
musicaldreams[info]elisa88 on July 13th, 2009 02:29 am (UTC)
Oh, some pones summer loving!
me likey :)
This is really amazing so far, Dougie sounds so cool, and relaxed, and the way he talks about surfing makes me wanna surf
Can't wait for more!
THE TURBO SLUT[info]evolia on July 13th, 2009 06:30 am (UTC)
I think it's probably wrong of me to have the song from grease in my head now...summer lovin', happened so faaaast! XD
ah well anyway! Glad you enjoyed it, and hopefully you'll enjoy the rest!
Hopelessly Bohemian: Tied Up | McFly[info]weasleynut on July 13th, 2009 03:50 am (UTC)
Woohoo this is going to be so good! :D Great to see you guys doing Pones. Perhaps you will spark my love for it again.
V[info]armillarysphere on July 13th, 2009 12:44 pm (UTC)
Hee, well, I hope it lives up to expectations! We fancied a crack at something different for a change - although Ellie did have to try hard to convince me to write it ;) (I got her back with the floynter though, muahaha XD)

Thanks for commenting! More soon :)
Mi[info]captaino7 on July 13th, 2009 12:04 pm (UTC)
i was originally going to say that i epically fail for not having read this til now because of the whole being abroad and not being near computers thing, but now that i saw you only posted it yesterday i feel much much better about it!!!!

PONES!!!!!! you girls truly are awesome, you know that!! you made me love junes and now you're writing pones and that makes me happy!!! and dougie's south african!!!!! oh my god, just, the ACCENT and him being a surfer and just, hot!!! i'm so damn excited for this, like you have no idea!!!! and 17 chapters too!!! schweeeeeeeeeeet!!!! can't wait to see how this plays out!!! i can so see sex on the beach happening, and not just the drink!!!! can't wait for more, though who knows when i'll get onto a computer next lol!!!!

I heart you both so hard right now!!!!

M. xoxo
THE TURBO SLUT: Dougie / make a face[info]evolia on July 13th, 2009 12:11 pm (UTC)
You do know that having sex on the beach is hardly comfortable, right? ;) we'll seeeeeeee what happens! So glad you enjoyed this introduction, hopefully you'll like the rest as well! It was loads of fun to write Dougie like this...love his mind in this fic! And I hope you will too :). Thanks thanks thanks!
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(no subject) - [info]captaino7 on July 13th, 2009 12:39 pm (UTC) (Expand)
Adriana[info]miss_pipedream on July 14th, 2009 12:54 am (UTC)
I have to admit; I had a bit of a crisis when this was posted. You see, I love both of your writings, but Pones is one of those pairings that makes my stomach churn (a little :P). DILEMMA.

But I decided to read it anyways, and so far I think it's great! I look forward to the next chapter - it'll be interesting to see how Danny and Dougie's relationship progresses (and how Harry feels about it).

<3
V[info]armillarysphere on July 14th, 2009 11:09 am (UTC)
Haha, well, I'm really not the biggest Pones fan, but Ellie wanted to write this, and I am but a slave to her wishes (*waggles eyebrows*) so we did, and I do love this little universe we created, so yeah. Hope you will too!

Glad you like it so far, there's much more to come. Thank you!! <3
lost_in_the_zoo[info]lost_in_the_zoo on July 14th, 2009 01:14 am (UTC)
n_n so good <3
THE TURBO SLUT: Dougie / Seriously i'm mad[info]evolia on July 14th, 2009 06:51 am (UTC)
Well, thanks! Back soon with more.
[info]if_i_fell1986 on July 14th, 2009 04:12 am (UTC)
His love for the ocean just seemed to grow after that, an insatiable hunger to feel free, to be alone, to be in control of something in his life.

Gah, what I wouldn't give to have something that felt like that.

This was a great beginning. I can't wait to see how the relationship between Dougie and the rest of them develops, especially between him and Danny. I am so looking forward to another fic by you two ladies. You're both really talented writers. :)
V[info]armillarysphere on July 14th, 2009 11:10 am (UTC)
Aw, thanks very much! That means a lot to us :)

More soon :D
lucymariepotts[info]lucymariepotts on July 27th, 2009 11:33 pm (UTC)
Fucking Hellla Awesome
PADFOOT!: dougie[info]katie_padfoot on February 24th, 2010 01:27 am (UTC)
im in love with this already, aswell as danny, harry and surfer!dougie.

ommm, so awesome.
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